Dr. Lisa Brewer is an associate professor of English at New River Community and Technical College, where she teaches composition, research, and literature. She uses Hawkes Learning’s Foundations of English, Second Edition courseware for her Developmental English course.
We first adopted Hawkes in our Developmental English course because many of our students were not able to score high enough on our placement tests to enroll in English 101. The major issues started at the basic sentence level. The areas of weakness ranged from needing to learn the parts of speech to what sentence boundaries are. Before we could work on thesis statements and paragraphs, I found that we needed to share a vocabulary for talking about sentences, and our wide variety of students in age and experience meant they had different skill levels and competencies. Some needed a refresher in certain areas, while others needed much more instruction and practice.
The first thing Hawkes helped with was their diagnostic tests in reading and grammar that are tied to lesson mastery. The diagnostic tests give the student and me a look into what areas need attention and what the student has already learned. I can see how many students need to work on comma splices or apostrophes and how many students performed well with subject and verb agreement and do not need to repeat that lesson. A student’s mastery of a skill will show up in the lessons assigned so that one does not have to do lessons already mastered. This helps a great deal in preventing boredom from the traditional method of covering a particular skill with the entire class and then moving on, knowing some have already mastered it, but others are still struggling. The lessons and mastery of skills are then individualized to each student’s strengths and weakness. The initial scores also indicate which students are almost ready for English 101 and which ones have a larger gap in skills to make up. This insight helps me plan and know where to spend my time and attention.
Because students are more conscious of what they are doing well and what they need to work on, they can articulate their accomplishments and become more confident about their writing skills. The Lesson, Practice, Certify method gives them concrete evidence, which I can reinforce when I see the improvement in their essay writing assignments. At mid-term and at the end of the semester, I give them a survey/writing reflection to find out how they are feeling about their writing at this point as compared to when the class started, and I receive specific feedback about what they are happy to have improved, how they had no confidence in the beginning but now they are more comfortable writing, and at mid-term, they let me know what they want to work on in upcoming classes, such as figuring out a good hook, revising introductions, and addressing their audience. They start asking the kinds of questions that I love to hear because they are not as anxious about the mechanics of writing, and their attitudes may have changed from a former negative high school experience.
I was skeptical about using Hawkes at first because I thought that this would be another program in which students do grammar exercises in isolation of their own writing and that effort would not translate into improvements in essay writing. I have been pleasantly surprised because a student can not move on from a lesson until he or she has demonstrated competency and learns why an answer is correct or incorrect, so grammar isn’t just busywork. I am also getting detailed feedback, so I know when to offer additional one-on-one help or practice something as a group, and I can let them know when they are succeeding in applying a particular skill in their essays. Confidence about small victories like the elimination of comma splices is something we celebrate.
Students often enter their first college English class with dread and anxiety, especially if they have not done well in it in the past. For many, the fundamentals of grammar and reading can be very dry and boring, so it’s not something they want to hear a lecture about or practice on their own. The Hawkes interactive lessons are more engaging because students know they are working on individual areas that need improvement, and they can see tangible evidence of their achievements in both the mastery of a skill and the positive feedback I can give them on their essays. Some students even work ahead and do lessons I have marked as bonus lessons because they see themselves getting better and want to cover additional topics for extra points.